IB (writing) Lit Blogs: Luke White

Observations Translation #1: This seems to be the most direct and simplest translation in terms of structure, having the least descriptive language.  With little imagery and standard syntax, it makes a big event seem somewhat ordinary. Translation #2: On the contrary, the more descriptive language and diction of the second translation presents the event as much more notable through words like "transformed" and "enormous," which make the sentence much more impactful.  The syntax of translation 2 is longer than translation 1, partially because more meaning is put into the second translation than the first. Translation #3: The third translation is similar to the second in syntax and structure.  Translation 3 slightly differs from translation 2 in diction, where "gigantic insect" seems to have a more grotesque connotation than "enormous bug." This translation is also te first to include the detail that Samsa was in his bed, although that might hav...

First, the image in the top left, with  what is probably Kathy pictured sitting with different ferns and plants, is interesting.  I first thought that the cover image might be set in Hailsham by the pond with evident vegetation in the image.  However, when looking t the image more closely, Kathy appears slightly older and in deep thought, alluding to the fact that she might be reflecting on her time at Hailsham.  Next, the cover at top right creates a feeling of peace and solidarity.  The lone boat might represent the isolated nature of Hailsham, yet the calm water  and picturesque sky could represent how Hailsham is a peaceful setting when compared to the realities of the students' futures.  Third, the cover on the bottom left is the only one out of the four the gives its audience a cold and negative feeling.  The drawing alludes to the organs that the students must donate, and the coloring of the cover shows the dark and inevitable futures of ...